In
my original design plan I had talked about how the entertainment value is lost
when reading across different platforms and I think that idea sort of became
lost as I went along with my project. I think this idea became moot when I did
my narrative. In my narrative I had begun to talk about how the world will sort
of change when paperback books are pushed to the side and technology has taken
over. So think that the entire concept of my project sort of altered when I did
my narrative, which I wasn’t entirely happy about. I also think that because of
this shift in ideas that I was unable to really get my message across as
effectively as I wanted. Especially in the last couple of photographs, Paper Dominoes and Burning Halo. I don’t think the message
is as clear in those they definitely need captions so the message is clear. If
I could go revise this project I would definitely go back and take more
pictures to fill in the holes I think are in my project. One thing that I’m unsure about is the background
of my project. I had changed it last minute and I got the opinion of my
roommate on whether or not the background was good but I have yet to get the
opinion of my peers who are working on the same project as I. However, I do
like my new background because I feel like the books look alien in this world,
which I want people to understand. That soon books are going to be as odd in
the home as a vinyl record is. I feel as if the pictures of my Nook actually
belong in this outer space atmosphere and don’t look as out of place and I’m
hoping that my audience is also getting that sense when they look at my
project. As far as the formatting goes, I wish I had a little more freedom with
putting the captions where I want to. I did not necessarily want to put my
captions all at the bottom. I wanted to put some on the right side of my
pictures. Since we read from left to right I thought this formatting would make
sense since this whole project is on books. It was also upsetting that I had to
put the captions on the bottom because they shrunk the size of my photos. As
far as everything else goes, I think I did well with taking pictures, I think
that I can keep the audience viewing this interested and I that you can clearly
see I’m comparing both new technology with old books. I also think you can see
my desire to hold onto to books as a part of my argument. I also think that my
ethos and pathos are clearly stated in the piece. The logos is a bit more
abstract but I think logos can be found in the fact and logic that things in
text are moving towards this technological world and that things like libraries
in and outside of the home and bookstores will either completely change or be
naught when this happens.
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